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First some minor text optimizations.

I found a passage of text that is a bit difficult to read:

You do also define *transitions* to that describes the action to get from one place to another.

Here is a slightly better version, but I don't really like it either:

You also define *transitions* to describe the action required to get from one place to another.

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Here's another suggestion for your consideration:

You also define *transitions*, which describe the action needed to get from one place to another.

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Here's another suggestion for your consideration:

You also define *transitions*, which describe the action needed to get from one place to another.

I added your version, sounds great 👍

@javiereguiluz javiereguiluz added this to the 5.4 milestone Dec 12, 2022
@carsonbot carsonbot changed the title Some minor text optimizations [Workflow] Some minor text optimizations Dec 12, 2022
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Thank you Robin.

@javiereguiluz javiereguiluz merged commit 9ecd679 into symfony:5.4 Dec 12, 2022
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