Removing uses of we from several book pages

Author: richardmiller-zz

book/controller.rst

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ maps a URL to that controller (#2).
 .. note::
 
     Though similarly named, a "front controller" is different from the
-    "controllers" we'll talk about in this chapter. A front controller
+    "controllers" talked about in this chapter. A front controller
     is a short PHP file that lives in your web directory and through which
     all requests are directed. A typical application will have a production
     front controller (e.g. ``app.php``) and a development front controller
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ working with forms, for example::
     public function updateAction(Request $request)
     {
         $form = $this->createForm(...);
-        
+
         $form->bindRequest($request);
         // ...
     }
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ object that's returned from that controller::
         ));
 
         // ... further modify the response or return it directly
-        
+
         return $response;
     }
 
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ value to each variable.
     a shortcut for core Symfony2 functionality. A forward can be accomplished
     directly via the ``http_kernel`` service. A forward returns a ``Response``
     object::
-    
+
         $httpKernel = $this->container->get('http_kernel');
         $response = $httpKernel->forward('AcmeHelloBundle:Hello:fancy', array(
             'name'  => $name,
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ The Symfony templating engine is explained in great detail in the
 
     The ``renderView`` method is a shortcut to direct use of the ``templating``
     service. The ``templating`` service can also be used directly::
-    
+
         $templating = $this->get('templating');
         $content = $templating->render('AcmeHelloBundle:Hello:index.html.twig', array('name' => $name));
 
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ the ``notice`` message:
         {% endif %}
 
     .. code-block:: php
-    
+
         <?php if ($view['session']->hasFlash('notice')): ?>
             <div class="flash-notice">
                 <?php echo $view['session']->getFlash('notice') ?>
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ headers and content that's sent back to the client::
 
     // create a simple Response with a 200 status code (the default)
     $response = new Response('Hello '.$name, 200);
-    
+
     // create a JSON-response with a 200 status code
     $response = new Response(json_encode(array('name' => $name)));
     $response->headers->set('Content-Type', 'application/json');

book/from_flat_php_to_symfony2.rst

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ better software than with flat PHP, you'll see for yourself.
 In this chapter, you'll write a simple application in flat PHP, and then
 refactor it to be more organized. You'll travel through time, seeing the
 decisions behind why web development has evolved over the past several years
-to where it is now. 
+to where it is now.
 
 By the end, you'll see how Symfony2 can rescue you from mundane tasks and
 let you take back control of your code.
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ to the area of *your* code that processes user input and prepares the response.
 In this case, our controller prepares data from the database and then includes
 a template to present that data. With the controller isolated, you could
 easily change *just* the template file if you needed to render the blog
-entries in some other format (e.g. ``list.json.php`` for JSON format). 
+entries in some other format (e.g. ``list.json.php`` for JSON format).
 
 Isolating the Application (Domain) Logic
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ The Sample Application in Symfony2
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 The blog has come a *long* way, but it still contains a lot of code for such
-a simple application. Along the way, we've also invented a simple routing
+a simple application. Along the way, you've made a simple routing
 system and a method using ``ob_start()`` and ``ob_get_clean()`` to render
 templates. If, for some reason, you needed to continue building this "framework"
 from scratch, you could at least use Symfony's standalone `Routing`_ and
@@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ them for you. Here's the same sample application, now built in Symfony2::
                 ->getRepository('AcmeBlogBundle:Post')
                 ->find($id)
             ;
-            
+
             if (!$post) {
                 // cause the 404 page not found to be displayed
                 throw $this->createNotFoundException();
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ now quite a bit simpler:
 
 .. code-block:: html+php
 
-    <!-- src/Acme/BlogBundle/Resources/views/Blog/list.html.php --> 
+    <!-- src/Acme/BlogBundle/Resources/views/Blog/list.html.php -->
     <?php $view->extend('::layout.html.php') ?>
 
     <?php $view['slots']->set('title', 'List of Posts') ?>
@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ The layout is nearly identical:
 
 .. note::
 
-    We'll leave the show template as an exercise, as it should be trivial to
+    The show template is left as an exercise, as it should be trivial to
     create based on the list template.
 
 When Symfony2's engine (called the ``Kernel``) boots up, it needs a map so
@@ -730,8 +730,8 @@ The corresponding ``layout.html.twig`` template is also easier to write:
     </html>
 
 Twig is well-supported in Symfony2. And while PHP templates will always
-be supported in Symfony2, we'll continue to discuss the many advantages of
-Twig. For more information, see the :doc:`templating chapter</book/templating>`.
+be supported in Symfony2, the many advantages of Twig will continue to
+be discussed. For more information, see the :doc:`templating chapter</book/templating>`.
 
 Learn more from the Cookbook
 ----------------------------

book/page_creation.rst

@@ -255,10 +255,10 @@ application should greet you:
     .. code-block:: text
 
         http://localhost/app.php/hello/Ryan
-    
+
     If you get an error, it's likely because you need to clear your cache
     by running:
-    
+
     .. code-block:: bash
 
         $ php app/console cache:clear --env=prod --no-debug
@@ -299,8 +299,8 @@ of writing the HTML inside the controller, render a template instead:
 
 .. note::
 
-   In order to use the :method:`Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Controller\\Controller::render` 
-   method, your controller must extend the 
+   In order to use the :method:`Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Controller\\Controller::render`
+   method, your controller must extend the
    :class:`Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Controller\\Controller` class,
    which adds shortcuts for tasks that are common inside controllers. This
    is done in the above example by adding the ``use`` statement on line 4
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ use a Kernel class, ``AppKernel``, to bootstrap the application.
         http://localhost/hello/Ryan
 
 Though front controllers are essential in handling every request, you'll
-rarely need to modify or even think about them. We'll mention them again
+rarely need to modify or even think about them. They'll be mentioned again
 briefly in the `Environments`_ section.
 
 The Application (``app``) Directory
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ format you prefer:
         imports:
             - { resource: parameters.ini }
             - { resource: security.yml }
-        
+
         framework:
             secret:          "%secret%"
             charset:         UTF-8
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ format you prefer:
             <import resource="parameters.ini" />
             <import resource="security.yml" />
         </imports>
-        
+
         <framework:config charset="UTF-8" secret="%secret%">
             <framework:router resource="%kernel.root_dir%/config/routing.xml" />
             <framework:form />

book/security.rst

@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ Users
 -----
 
 In the previous sections, you learned how you can protect different resources
-by requiring a set of *roles* for a resource. In this section we'll explore
+by requiring a set of *roles* for a resource. This section explores
 the other side of authorization: users.
 
 Where do Users come from? (*User Providers*)
@@ -1199,7 +1199,7 @@ look like::
     method of an anonymous user object will return true. To check if your
     user is actually authenticated, check for the ``IS_AUTHENTICATED_FULLY``
     role.
-    
+
 In a Twig Template this object can be accessed via the ``app.user`` key,
 which calls the :method:`GlobalVariables::getUser()<Symfony\\Bundle\\FrameworkBundle\\Templating\\GlobalVariables::getUser>`
 method:
@@ -1570,7 +1570,7 @@ Access Control in Controllers
 -----------------------------
 
 If you want to check if the current user has a role in your controller, use
-the :method:`Symfony\\Component\\Security\\Core\\SecurityContext::isGranted` 
+the :method:`Symfony\\Component\\Security\\Core\\SecurityContext::isGranted`
 method of the security context::
 
     public function indexAction()

book/templating.rst

@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@ Template Inheritance and Layouts
 --------------------------------
 
 More often than not, templates in a project share common elements, like the
-header, footer, sidebar or more. In Symfony2, we like to think about this
-problem differently: a template can be decorated by another one. This works
+header, footer, sidebar or more. In Symfony2, this problem is thought about
+differently: a template can be decorated by another one. This works
 exactly the same as PHP classes: template inheritance allows you to build
 a base "layout" template that contains all the common elements of your site
 defined as **blocks** (think "PHP class with base methods"). A child template
@@ -468,8 +468,8 @@ ease the work of the template designer. In PHP, the templating system provides
 an extensible *helper* system that provides useful features in a template
 context.
 
-We've already seen a few built-in Twig tags (``{% block %}`` & ``{% extends %}``)
-as well as an example of a PHP helper (``$view['slots']``). Let's learn a
+You've already seen a few built-in Twig tags (``{% block %}`` & ``{% extends %}``)
+as well as an example of a PHP helper (``$view['slots']``). Here you will learn a
 few more.
 
 .. index::
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ template using the ``with`` command.
 .. tip::
 
     The ``{'article': article}`` syntax is the standard Twig syntax for hash
-    maps (i.e. an array with named keys). If we needed to pass in multiple
+    maps (i.e. an array with named keys). If you needed to pass in multiple
     elements, it would look like this: ``{'foo': foo, 'bar': bar}``.
 
 .. index::
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ The ``recentList`` template is perfectly straightforward:
 
 .. note::
 
-    Notice that we've cheated and hardcoded the article URL in this example
+    Notice that the article URL is hardcoded in this example
     (e.g. ``/article/*slug*``). This is a bad practice. In the next section,
     you'll learn how to do this correctly.
 
@@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ advantage of Symfony's template inheritance.
     This section will teach you the philosophy behind including stylesheet
     and Javascript assets in Symfony. Symfony also packages another library,
     called Assetic, which follows this philosophy but allows you to do much
-    more interesting things with those assets. For more information on 
+    more interesting things with those assets. For more information on
     using Assetic see :doc:`/cookbook/assetic/asset_management`.
 
 
@@ -851,13 +851,13 @@ page. From inside that contact page's template, do the following:
 
     {% block stylesheets %}
         {{ parent() }}
-        
+
         <link href="{{ asset('/css/contact.css') }}" type="text/css" rel="stylesheet" />
     {% endblock %}
-    
+
     {# ... #}
 
-In the child template, you simply override the ``stylesheets`` block and 
+In the child template, you simply override the ``stylesheets`` block and
 put your new stylesheet tag inside of that block. Of course, since you want
 to add to the parent block's content (and not actually *replace* it), you
 should use the ``parent()`` Twig function to include everything from the ``stylesheets``
@@ -1063,7 +1063,7 @@ Three-level Inheritance
 -----------------------
 
 One common way to use inheritance is to use a three-level approach. This
-method works perfectly with the three different types of templates we've just
+method works perfectly with the three different types of templates that were just
 covered:
 
 * Create a ``app/Resources/views/base.html.twig`` file that contains the main
@@ -1282,7 +1282,7 @@ pattern is to do the following::
     public function indexAction()
     {
         $format = $this->getRequest()->getRequestFormat();
-    
+
         return $this->render('AcmeBlogBundle:Blog:index.'.$format.'.twig');
     }
 

book/testing.rst

@@ -226,11 +226,11 @@ document::
 
         request(
             $method,
-            $uri, 
-            array $parameters = array(), 
-            array $files = array(), 
-            array $server = array(), 
-            $content = null, 
+            $uri,
+            array $parameters = array(),
+            array $files = array(),
+            array $server = array(),
+            $content = null,
             $changeHistory = true
         )
 
@@ -434,8 +434,8 @@ it automatically. You can examine the response and force a redirection
 afterwards  with the ``followRedirect()`` method::
 
     $crawler = $client->followRedirect();
-    
-If you want the client to automatically follow all redirects, you can 
+
+If you want the client to automatically follow all redirects, you can
 force him with the ``followRedirects()`` method::
 
     $client->followRedirects();
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ Just like links, you select forms with the ``selectButton()`` method::
 
 .. note::
 
-    Notice that we select form buttons and not forms as a form can have several
+    Notice that you select form buttons and not forms as a form can have several
     buttons; if you use the traversing API, keep in mind that you must look for a
     button.