From 661524388a1774f31842982ce4a60d09dd3e072e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Travis Cross <tc@traviscross.com>
Date: Fri, 29 Nov 2024 23:05:40 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Re-tighten up some verbiage

We had said "further upon X".  We really meant "further X".  This was
changed in a recent PR to "further improve upon X" instead, but that's
a bit odd as the sentence uses "improvements" directly before it.

Let's tighten this up to just say "further X".
---
 posts/2024-11-27-Rust-2024-public-testing.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/posts/2024-11-27-Rust-2024-public-testing.md b/posts/2024-11-27-Rust-2024-public-testing.md
index 4fbdb2728..9dabf7a0b 100644
--- a/posts/2024-11-27-Rust-2024-public-testing.md
+++ b/posts/2024-11-27-Rust-2024-public-testing.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ team: the Edition 2024 Project Group <https://doc.rust-lang.org/nightly/edition-
 
 # Rust 2024 call for testing
 
-We've been hard at work on Rust 2024. We're thrilled about how it has turned out. It's going to be the largest edition since Rust 2015. It has a great many improvements that make the language more consistent and ergonomic, that further improve upon our relentless commitment to safety, and that will open the door to long-awaited features such as `gen` blocks, `let` chains, and the never (`!`) type. For more on the changes, see the nightly [Edition Guide](https://doc.rust-lang.org/nightly/edition-guide/rust-2024/index.html).
+We've been hard at work on Rust 2024. We're thrilled about how it has turned out. It's going to be the largest edition since Rust 2015. It has a great many improvements that make the language more consistent and ergonomic, that further our relentless commitment to safety, and that will open the door to long-awaited features such as `gen` blocks, `let` chains, and the never (`!`) type. For more on the changes, see the nightly [Edition Guide](https://doc.rust-lang.org/nightly/edition-guide/rust-2024/index.html).
 
 As planned, we recently merged the feature-complete Rust 2024 edition [to the release train](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/pull/133349) for Rust 1.85. It has now entered **nightly beta**[^1].