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posts/2023-10-18-announcing-the-new-rust-project-directors.md

@@ -15,13 +15,15 @@ The new Project Directors are:
 
 They will join [Ryan Levick] and [Mark Rousskov] to make up the five members of the Rust Foundation Board of Directors who represent the Rust Project.
 
-The board is made up Project Directors, who come from and represent the Rust Project, and Member Directors who represent the corporate members of the Rust Foundation.
-These groups of Directors each, as a block, have equal voting power.
+The board is made up of Project Directors, who come from and represent the Rust Project, and Member Directors, who represent the corporate members of the Rust Foundation.
+
+Both of these director groups have equal voting power.
 
 [Ryan Levick]: https://github.com/rylev
 [Mark Rousskov]: https://github.com/mark-simulacrum
 
-We look forward to working with and being represented by this new suite of project directors.
+We look forward to working with and being represented by this new group of project directors.
+
 We were fortunate to have a number of excellent candidates and this was a difficult decision.
 We wish to express our gratitude to all of the candidates who were considered for this role!
 We also extend our thanks to the project as a whole who participated by nominating candidates and providing additional feedback once the nominees were published.
@@ -36,4 +38,5 @@ The [Project Director Elections Subcommittee][pde-subcommittee] will be followin
 We are expecting another election next year to start a rotating cadence of 2-year terms.
 Project governance is about iterating and refining over time.
 
-Once again, we thank all who were involved in this process and we are excited to welcome our new suite of Project Directors.
+Once again, we thank all who were involved in this process and we are excited to welcome our new Project Directors.
+