whatsnew fix

Author: h-vetinari

doc/source/whatsnew/v0.24.0.txt

@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@ Backwards incompatible API changes
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 - A newly constructed empty :class:`DataFrame` with integer as the ``dtype`` will now only be cast to ``float64`` if ``index`` is specified (:issue:`22858`)
-- The `.str`-accessor does not work for anything other than string data anymore.
-  Any other uses (like ``bytes``) were never intended to be used and purely due to limitations of dtype checking (:issue:`23011`, :issue:`23163`)
+- The `.str`-accessor does not work for anything other than string data anymore. Any other uses (like ``bytes``, for example)
+  were never intended to be used and "worked" purely due to limitations of dtype checking (:issue:`23011`, :issue:`23163`)
 
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