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Author: benjie

README.md

@@ -16,29 +16,35 @@ You can find more discussions on the [#website channel on the GraphQL Slack](htt
 ## Overview
 
 **GraphQL** is a query language for APIs and a runtime for fulfilling those queries with your existing data. It provides:
-- A complete and understandable description of the data in your API.
-- The ability for clients to ask for exactly what they need.
-- Powerful developer tools.
+
+- a complete and understandable description of the data in your API,
+- support for powerful developer tooling, and
+-  precise querying, which offers several benefits:
+  - clients request only the data they need, improving efficiency;
+  - new fields and features can be added without impacting existing clients; and
+  - field-level usage can be tracked and monitored for insights and optimization.
 
 The [GraphQL Specification](https://spec.graphql.org/) is open source and governed by the [GraphQL Foundation](https://foundation.graphql.org/).
 
 ## Documentation
 
 - [GraphQL Website](https://graphql.org/)
-- [Reference Documentation](https://graphql.org/learn/) - Detailed guides and tutorials.
-- [Language Support, Tools, and Services](https://graphql.org/code/) - Available tools and libraries for different languages.
-- [Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)](https://graphql.org/faq/) - Answers to common questions.
-- [Community Resources](https://graphql.org/community/) - Community-driven resources.
+- [Reference Documentation](https://graphql.org/learn/)
+- [Language Support, Tools, and Services](https://graphql.org/code/)
+- [Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)](https://graphql.org/faq/)
+- [Community Resources](https://graphql.org/community/)
 
 ## Deployment
 
 The website is deployed via [Vercel](https://vercel.com) on merges to the `source` branch. To preview changes locally, follow these steps:
+
 1. Clone the repository:  
-   `git clone https://github.com/graphql/graphql.github.io.git`
+   `git clone https://github.com/graphql/graphql.github.io.git`  
+   `cd graphql.github.io`
 2. Install dependencies:  
    `npm install`
 3. Run the site locally:  
-   `npm start`
+   `npm run dev`
 
 ## How to Contribute
 
@@ -47,13 +53,14 @@ We welcome contributions! 🎉 Please refer to our [contributing guide](./CONTRI
 ### CLA Process
 
 Before contributing, all participants must sign the free [GraphQL Specification Membership Agreement](https://preview-spec-membership.graphql.org). You only need to do this once, and it can be signed by:
+
 - [Individual contributors](http://individual-spec-membership.graphql.org/)
 - [Employers](http://corporate-spec-membership.graphql.org/)
 
 To initiate the signature process, please open a PR against this repository. The EasyCLA bot will block the merge if the membership agreement has not been signed.
 
 For more information on the CLA, check out the [detailed instructions here](https://github.com/graphql/graphql-wg/tree/main/membership). If you encounter any issues, please contact us at [operations@graphql.org](mailto:operations@graphql.org).
 
-## Financial Support
+## Join the Foundation!
 
 If your company benefits from GraphQL and you would like to provide essential financial support for the systems and people that power our community, please consider becoming a member of the [GraphQL Foundation](https://foundation.graphql.org/join).