diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 3479485590..e9c0d5832b 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -10,10 +10,10 @@ This technical preview contains a [draft specification for GraphQL](https://gith and a reference implementation in JavaScript that implements that draft, GraphQL.js. -The reference implemention provides base libraries in javascript that would +The reference implemention provides base libraries in JavaScript that would provide the basis for full GraphQL implementations and tools. It is not a fully standalone GraphQL server that a client developer could use to start -manipulating and querying data. Most importantly it provides no mapping to a +manipulating and querying data. Most importantly, it provides no mapping to a functioning, production-ready backend. The only “backend” we have targeted for this early preview are in-memory stubs in test cases. @@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ many engineers used this information to implement the parts of the system that we discussed publically. We want to support those engineers by providing both a formal specification and a reference implementation for the system as a whole. -To that end the target audience is not the client developer, but those who have -or are actively interested in building their own GraphQL implementations and -tools. Critically we also want feedback on system and to incorporate that +To that end, the target audience is not the client developer, but those who have +built or are actively interested in building their own GraphQL implementations and +tools. Critically, we also want feedback on the system and to incorporate that feedback in our final release. -In order to be broadly adopted GraphQL will have to target a wide +In order to be broadly adopted, GraphQL will have to target a wide variety of backends, frameworks, and languages, which will necessitate a collaborative effort across projects and organizations. This technical preview marks the beginning of that process.