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46 | 46 | When referring to a compact disk, use "CD". For example, "Insert the CD into the CD drive". The plural is "CDs".
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| - See the Word Usage chapter of the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for more information. |
| 49 | + Refer to the Word Usage chapter of the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for more information. |
50 | 50 | </para>
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67 | 67 | <listitem>
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68 | 68 | <para>
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69 | 69 | Correct. Ceph is a distributed storage platform that provides object, block, and file storage.<footnote> <para>
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| - See <ulink url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ceph_%28software%29" /> |
| 70 | + Refer to <ulink url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ceph_%28software%29" /> |
71 | 71 | </para>
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72 | 72 | </footnote> Do not use alternative capitalization.
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73 | 73 | </para>
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129 | 129 | Define on first use; generally continuous integration/continuous delivery. It does not mean continuous development, a term with questionable usefulness and only marginal adoption.
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130 | 130 | </para>
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131 | 131 | <para>
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| - See also <xref linkend="continuous-integration" />, <xref linkend="continuous-delivery" />, <xref linkend="continuous-deployment" />. |
| 132 | + Refer also to <xref linkend="continuous-integration" />, <xref linkend="continuous-delivery" />, <xref linkend="continuous-deployment" />. |
133 | 133 | </para>
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153 | 153 | </para>
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154 | 154 | <!-- Added comment about "click on". -->
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155 | 155 | <para>
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| - See the Word Usage chapter of the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for more information. |
| 156 | + Refer to the Word Usage chapter of the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for more information. |
157 | 157 | </para>
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158 | 158 |
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186 | 186 | <term>cloud</term>
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187 | 187 | <listitem>
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188 | 188 | <para>
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| - Although cloud is important to Red Hat's business, it is not a proper noun. Do not capitalize, unless it is part of a Red Hat product, service, solution, or business unit name. Use a lowercase "c" when referring to cloud or cloud computing in a general sense. Use a capitalized "C" when referring to the full name of official products, such as Red Hat CloudForms or Red Hat Cloud Foundations. See also "big data". |
| 189 | + Although cloud is important to Red Hat's business, it is not a proper noun. Do not capitalize, unless it is part of a Red Hat product, service, solution, or business unit name. Use a lowercase "c" when referring to cloud or cloud computing in a general sense. Use a capitalized "C" when referring to the full name of official products, such as Red Hat CloudForms or Red Hat Cloud Foundations. Refer also to "big data". |
190 | 190 | </para>
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247 | 247 | <term>combo-box</term>
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248 | 248 | <listitem>
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249 | 249 | <para>
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| - Do not use as an abbreviation for "combination box". See the relevant entry in the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for further usage information. |
| 250 | + Do not use as an abbreviation for "combination box". Refer to the relevant entry in the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for further usage information. |
251 | 251 | </para>
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313 | 313 | <term>command line, command prompt, command-line</term>
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314 | 314 | <listitem>
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315 | 315 | <para>
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| 316 | + Refer to the appropriate entries in the <citetitle>IBM Style Guide</citetitle> for an explanation of how to use these terms. |
317 | 317 | </para>
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348 | 348 | <term>communication service provider (CSP)</term>
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349 | 349 | <listitem>
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350 | 350 | <para>
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| - Another way to refer to a telecommunications provider. See also <xref linkend="telco" />. |
| 351 | + Another way to refer to a telecommunications provider. Refer also to <xref linkend="telco" />. |
352 | 352 | </para>
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358 | 358 | <term>Containers-as-a-Service</term>
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359 | 359 | <listitem>
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360 | 360 | <para>
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| - The term "Containers-as-a-Service" is owned by Docker and should be used only when referring to that company's offering. See also <xref linkend="as-a-service" />. |
| 361 | + The term "Containers-as-a-Service" is owned by Docker and should be used only when referring to that company's offering. Refer also to <xref linkend="as-a-service" />. |
362 | 362 | </para>
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513 | 513 | <emphasis>n.</emphasis> CVE stands for Common Vulnerabilities and Exposures, and should be capitalized as shown.
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| - See <ulink url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Common_Vulnerabilities_and_Exposures"></ulink> for more information. |
| 514 | + Refer to <ulink url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Common_Vulnerabilities_and_Exposures"></ulink> for more information. |
515 | 515 | </para>
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